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Charles Nicol's avatar

An interesting tale, if not a little over sentimental in places, but otherwise a pretty good story.

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Nick Enlowe's avatar

Sankyu for reading!~ I will be smoothing this one out over the next few days so it should be taking shape into a much nicer and more polished story soon. I enjoyed your story submission as well!

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Charles Nicol's avatar

Thank you.

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